Month: February 2016

Responding to a Text HWK1 27th Febuary 2016

The journey for Felix and Zelda has both physical and emotional effects. The physical is that they have to walk all day and it is harder for Felix because he has to tell stories to Zelda and give her a piggy back ride. They tried to sleep but the Nazi did not let them sleep so they got more and more tired like they did not want to carry on but they wanted to find their parents. Another reason is that the Nazi don’t give food or water to them so they suffer from hunger and tiredness.  The emotional effects are that they miss their parents and they are desperate to find them. Also have to watch people being shot and hurt by the Nazi.

By Danilo De Souza

Writing at Length HWK4 Saturday 6th January2016

The story that I remember from when I was younger is birthday surprise. It is about a shepherd dog whose name is Patch and it is his birthday at the farm. Fred the farm decided to bake a cake for patch’s birthday. The farmer takes Patch to count sheep and he and the rest of the animals start to decorated the barn. They put the present in the hay and put up banners and Fred starts to fill the balloon but it was taking too long so he had an idea he said,” I will use the puffomatic balloon-blower all I need is a flick of a switch and it will be done faster than you can say party! “. Fred switched the switch and the balloon blew up to their full size but they did not stop. They grew bigger and bigger and did not stop. Suddenly BANG!  They burst bale went ever where the animals ran with a fright.  Patch saw the explosion and ran to see what happened he saw Fred’s hat and barked then jenny came with a bone shape cake and said surprise Patch. Everyone shouted Happy Birthday Patch!