Perfect Paragraph Tuesday 26th of January 2016

Football is very interesting to watch. Roaring at your team when they score and booing when they conceding goals. My favourite team is Chelsea FC. I will admit we are not doing great this season and we had better ones but football is not about glory it is about the love for your team.That what every sport should be about, the love for the team.

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  1. Ineligible because of this:

    “That what every sport should be about”

    Also multiple problems with sentence structure are present. Each sentence needs a verb and a subject.

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